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Montevideo, Uruguay

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:iconfallenzeraphine:
What I really adore about this photograph is its simplicity, it's a photograph of joy, and it convey the emotion extremely well, the composition is extremely well done, by only including the legs of the person that's holding what seems like a kite adds a sense of mystery to the scene, you always wonder what this person holding on his hands, and who this person is, the little boy is overjoyed with excitement, shallow depth of field adds a lot of depth to this scene while keeping the viewer focused on the subject at hand, the coloring is extremely well done, the low saturation gives it a vintage look and its very appropriate for the theme of this Photograph.

In the area of improving things, there's nothing much to say, this photograph is on the spot in all areas, maybe if you were able to squeeze in the foots of the person it might have improved the visual impact to an extent, but honestly photograph looks perfect the way it is.

this photograph is a prime example of simplicity creating a great visual Impact, keep up the brilliant work.
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:iconmichref:
a ver, veamos... los hilos estan muy blancos, el estampado del short esta medio fuera de moda, como que muy setentosos, y ese mar.... tan fuera de foco.
voy bien?
al menos hago el intento :P
no podes!!! mira la cara de ese pibe! te sobran los titulos! los rostros ya dicen todo.
no digo mas nada... :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

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Lucas P. Michref
:iconmassat:
La primer parte, son cosas que debería corregir?

La cara del guachito es una ternura! :)
:iconmichref:
jajaja la primera parte es una broma! es un intento frustrado de encontrar algo que no me gusta en la foto... como en las anteriores me pedias una critica sincera y que te diga si algo no me gusta o podrias mejorar y no podia porque para mi estaban mas que buenas en esta que me pasa lo mismo al menos lo intente :P jejeeje
fijate que no solo le di :+fav: tambien la puse en una coleccion ;)
ES GENIAL!!! nada que no me guste.

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Lucas P. Michref
:iconmassat:
Me alegro que así sea entonces :)
:iconstamatisgr:
beautiful picture but wrong category :)

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:iconstamatisgr:
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• admin of #The-Yard-Collective Street Photography Club
...a cool place to see life as it is.
:iconehofferle:
esta foto es increible, como interactua el pequeño con la mirada a su madre, supongo, tiene mil historias que contar esta foto. congrats!

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:iconmassat:
Muchas gracias, a mi esta foto me enternece.
El niño miraba a la madre, que a su vez estaba remontando una cometa... la verdad que tuve suerte al estar con la cámara en ese momento :)

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*The-Yard-Collective

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
1/250 second
F/5.6
170 mm
400
Mar 22, 2009, 6:26:34 PM

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